Wednesday, May 18, 2016

Writing

We had to do a story and we had to include jandles a duck and keys.

I'm home finally I'm running as fast as I can to get to my apartment.What's  that creeking  noise?it’s probably the door mm when I unlocked the door my jandle was tighter then before so I decided to lay down  on my bed I still have my jandles on I might go get a drink but my door is locked my jandles are are gone so I went and sat on the window and think of what happened and I heard something weird and then my jandles slipped ahh then I looked up and fell on my bed in shock breathing loudly it was not a person or an bird it was a devel! With black eyes I said to myself this is a dream but it wasn't it helped me tho it is a good devil.Then it gave me keys to the door finally I said to myself should I trust it? ahh ok I will ring the police/Paul Blart. I rang Paul Blart he said I'm Paul Blart what's the problem there is a devil in my apartment it is 263 Main Street I'm on my way I saw someone riding a pig down the street is that him no it's not o right devel after this I'm apartment.tlhats why it was only $1 it was so cheap tho I'll find a better one.Then I heard the police Paul Blart is here I'm the man watch out next to you the devel Paul Blart runs really fast the devil can't catch him run run as fast as you can but you can't catch me I'm Paul Blart.And then a guy called rowen a swat came and started shooting the devil the devil said you again rowen was like you! you were my friend the duck said just stop why are you still waring jandles? Yer.Why are you still talking rowen he is my best friend he lived there he haunts it he doesn't hurt anyone ok sorry for ringing the police it's ok.

1 comment:

  1. this is a really interesting and imaginative story Roy! you need to remember to include punctuation, but excellent creativity! mum

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